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Love: Unreasonable Hope

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Kill me now if you don't feel the same
That'd be unreasonable but it would ease the pain
I can't believe with everything going on
Love is the first thing on my mind

Please say you love me
Even if you don't mean it
It means something to me

This poem is not finished
Until you stop leading me on
Let me know  how you feel
& a third verse will be added to this song
It's not 'complete'. It is complete enough to actually be a poem but... eh, read it and you'll understand.
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Lovespoon's avatar
I really like the flow of your words. I've read several poems. This I like best because of the second stanza. Something yin-yang or for against the stanza at the same time. Interesting. Nice poem. :)